T H E R E S C U E
"EVERYONE FOLLOW ME," meowed Stargleam as she ran(?) for the entrance to the camp. Tears streamed down her face. She was so sad. Her father had died, and her leader was gone.
"Flamepaw, Lakepaw, Dustpelt, Mom, Lionblaze, follow me!" she said. "I NEED A PATROL."
They ran into the forest, their paws working quickly. She would kill Hollyleaf and Tigerstar for what they'd done! She battle cried, using her(?) nose to tear down the evil cats.
Her heat burned!
Soon they found them. They were hiding behind a boulder. "Hahaha!" laughed Hollyleaf, putting her claw on Firestar's throat. "I'VE GOT YOU NOW!"
Stargleam gasped. "No! Firestar!" she screamed. "Flamepaw, go!" she said.
Flamepaw hurled herself(?) at Hollyleaf. Hollyleaf looked …Read more >
(?) means the letters were either so garbled I had to take a far guess or that a word that really, really had to be there was not.
As a Jayfeather fan, this story makes me VERY uncomfortable...poor Jayfeather...
C H A P T E R F I V E (Actually Chapter 6)
Starpaw said, "I...I..."
She was so confused. These cats had asked her to be their mate, and what was she suppose to do? They were both handsome and alluring(?), but both had mates! And she loved them both! Firestar was so kind, and he obviously liked her a lot. Graystripe was so funny and cool.
"!" said Starpaw.
She ran into the forest. It was too much. She couldn't choose! She ran and ran until her paws were hurting. Then she realized she had crossed the border. Oh no! she thought. ShadowClan w…Read more >
(?) beside a word means the letters were so garbled I had to use a far guess or a word that really, really needed to be there was missing.
A L L I A N C E S
Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt
Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown taby tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat: Jayfeather - gray tom
Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes (Apprentice: Foxpaw)
Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom
Sandstrom - pale ginger she-cat
Cloudtail - long-haired white tom (Apprentice: Daisypaw)
Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom
Sorreltail - tortiseshell and white she-cat with amber eyes
Thornclaw - golden-brown tabby tom
Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches
Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and a…Read more >
If it is okay with everyone, I will put a full grammar and spelling corrected Starkit's Prophecy on my blog for everyone to read without using Google Translate. If this is against rules or something, I WILL TAKE IT DOWN IMMEDIATELY. Please tell me...nicely. I'm not really sure if I'm allowed to but I think it would help.Read more >